雅思小作文范文：剑桥雅思5第29页
<p> <span word="This">This</span> <span word="line">line</span> <span word="chart">chart</span> <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="changes">changes</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="proportion">proportion</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="elderly">elderly</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="countries">countries</span> <span word="from">from</span> 1940 <span word="till">till</span> <span word="today">today</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="offers">offers</span> <span word="predictions">predictions</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="period">period</span> <span word="to">to</span> 2040.</p><p> 注意趋势描述的语言，对照对比的点和表达方式。</p><p> <span word="During">During</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="score">score</span> <span word="years">years</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="USA">USA</span> <span word="generally">generally</span> <span word="outweighed">outweighed</span> <span word="Sweden">Sweden</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="terms">terms</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="proportion">proportion</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="aged">aged</span> 65 <span word="and">and</span> <span word="over">over</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="gaps">gaps</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="remarkable">remarkable</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="stark">stark</span> <span word="contrast">contrast</span>, <span word="Sweden">Sweden</span> <span word="strikingly">strikingly</span> <span word="eclipsed">eclipsed</span> <span word="Japan">Japan</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="aspect">aspect</span> <span word="evidenced">evidenced</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="in">in</span> 1940 <span word="the">the</span> <span word="proportion">proportion</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="USA">USA</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="about">about</span> 9%, <span word="clearly">clearly</span> <span word="higher">higher</span> <span word="than">than</span> 5% <span word="for">for</span> <span word="Japan">Japan</span>.</p><p> <span word="Whereas">Whereas</span> <span word="Japan">Japan</span> <span word="experienced">experienced</span> <span word="declines">declines</span> <span word="from">from</span> 5% <span word="to">to</span> 3% , <span word="both">both</span> <span word="Sweden">Sweden</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="USA">USA</span> <span word="climbed">climbed</span>. <span word="Put">Put</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="detail">detail</span>, <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="year">year</span> 1983, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="figures">figures</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="peaked">peaked</span> <span word="at">at</span> 15% <span word="and">and</span> 13% <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="USA">USA</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Sweden">Sweden</span> <span word="respectively">respectively</span>. <span word="Noticeably">Noticeably</span>, <span word="in">in</span> 1997 <span word="the">the</span> <span word="proportion">proportion</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="USA">USA</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="equal">equal</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Sweden">Sweden</span>.</p><p> <span word="According">According</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="forecast">forecast</span>, <span word="from">from</span> <span word="now">now</span> <span word="on">on</span>, <span word="all">all</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="countries">countries</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="skyrocket">skyrocket</span> <span word="although">although</span> <span word="exceptions">exceptions</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="happen">happen</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="by">by</span> 2040 <span word="the">the</span> <span word="proportion">proportion</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="peaked">peaked</span> <span word="at">at</span> 27%, 25%, <span word="and">and</span> 23% <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Japan">Japan</span>, <span word="Sweden">Sweden</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="USA">USA</span> <span word="respectively">respectively</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="sum">sum</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="countries">countries</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="field">field</span> <span word="under">under</span> <span word="study">study</span>.</p><p> </p><p> </p>
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