雅思写作参考范文：生活压力
<p> 题型：问题+理由+建议</p><p> 测试语言技能:</p><p> <span word="l">l</span> 表述问题、描述现象</p><p> <span word="l">l</span> 分析原因</p><p> <span word="l">l</span> 解决方案提出，利弊</p><p> 题材：生活压力</p><p> 命题中哪个概念外延太宽?定义模糊?分类思维</p><p> <span word="l">l</span> <span word="People">People</span>?---年龄，性别，生活方式</p><p> <span word="l">l</span> <span word="Life">Life</span>?学习，工作，</p><p> <span word="l">l</span> <span word="Stress">Stress</span>? 生存、竞争、心理、物理</p><p> 从学生到农民到都市雇员普遍感觉生活压力。虽然原因非常复杂，但是总体可以概括为以下几个方面。</p><p> 紧邻原则</p><p> <span word="Students">Students</span>, <span word="farmers">farmers</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="urban">urban</span> <span word="areas">areas</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="subject">subject</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="pressure">pressure</span>. <span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="millions">millions</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="forms">forms</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="essence">essence</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="grouped">grouped</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="particular">particular</span> <span word="categories">categories</span>.</p><p> <span word="First">First</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="students">students</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="pressured">pressured</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="examinations">examinations</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="frequent">frequent</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="difficult">difficult</span>. <span word="Take">Take</span> <span word="mathematics">mathematics</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="example">example</span>. <span word="Each">Each</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="troubled">troubled</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="examinations">examinations</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="mathematics">mathematics</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> <span word="four">four</span> <span word="times">times</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="successful">successful</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="heavy">heavy</span> <span word="pressure">pressure</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span>. <span word="Another">Another</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="pressure">pressure</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="uncertain">uncertain</span> <span word="future">future</span> <span word="employment">employment</span>. <span word="That">That</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="graduates">graduates</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="unable">unable</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="fix">fix</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="market">market</span>.</p><p> <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="why">why</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="farmers">farmers</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="stressful">stressful</span> <span word="life">life</span>? <span word="Where">Where</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="pastoral">pastoral</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="gone">gone</span>? <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="governments">governments</span> <span word="heavy">heavy</span> <span word="tax">tax</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> 30% <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="yields">yields</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="paid">paid</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="tax">tax</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="to">to</span> <span word="farm">farm</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="becomes">becomes</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="expensive">expensive</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="buy">buy</span> <span word="pesticides">pesticides</span>, <span word="chemical">chemical</span> <span word="fertilizer">fertilizer</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="seeds">seeds</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="instance">instance</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="electricity">electricity</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="irrigation">irrigation</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="times">times</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="five">five</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="ago">ago</span>.</p>
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