雅思写作范文：监狱教育
<p> 旧题<span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="sending">sending</span> <span word="criminals">criminals</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="prison">prison</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="effective">effective</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="deal">deal</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="them">them</span>. <span word="Others">Others</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="training">training</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="solutions">solutions</span>. <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="views">views</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>.</p><p> 新题<span word="Prisons">Prisons</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="useless">useless</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="crime">crime</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="solution">solution</span>.<span word="Do">Do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="statement">statement</span>?</p><p> <span word="Give">Give</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="answer">answer</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="include">include</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="relevant">relevant</span> <span word="examples">examples</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>.</p><p> 谢振礼老师雅思范文：监狱教育</p><p> <span word="IELTS">IELTS</span> <span word="Writing">Writing</span> <span word="Task">Task</span> 2</p><p> <span word="Essay">Essay</span> <span word="Topic">Topic</span>: <span word="Criminals">Criminals</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Prisons">Prisons</span></p><p> <span word="As">As</span> <span word="seen">seen</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="China">China</span>, 2012-5-12</p><p> 谢振礼老师点评》</p><p> 此试题把作者搞糊涂了，顿时无从下手作答。按个人的知识或经验，重犯理当坐大牢，藉以隔离社会而不至于再伤害无辜。监狱里都有职业训练--木工，水泥工，机器工，烹饪，修车，也有成人教育课程。总希望犯人出狱后改邪归正，从此变成良民。搞不懂的是为什么真题问: 施于罪犯教育训练胜过送这些坏蛋去坐牢更是良策。你同意还是不同意。疑点是：难道教育的场所是和监狱分开?搞不懂!</p><p> 英文写作高手答题的立场清清楚楚，论证头头是道，很值得烤鸭参考。大意是说教育囚犯比起监禁囚犯更为划算，而却又能让坏人有改过自新的机会。就这样写，只要英文有慎老师一半的水平，保证写作高分。</p>
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