雅思写作：用简单句进行精彩的表达
<p> 雅思写作：用简单句进行精彩的表达 大多数考生会在备考雅思时花很多精力在长句、复杂句的练习上，考试时也会尽量使用长句。当然，如果考生能够熟练地运用各种句式写出精彩的长句，确实能给文章增色不少。 然而一味地追求句子的长度有时反而会牺牲句子的可读性，特别是对一些基础一般的学生来说，有时生硬地追求长句反而破坏了句子的句法准确性。下面，将为考生们列举一些非必要的长难句，帮你学会用简单句，进行准确出彩的表达。</p><p> 建议一： 避免空洞的单词和词组</p><p> 1. 一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息，完全可以被删掉。比如下面的句子：</p><p> <span word="When">When</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="considered">considered</span>, <span word="young">young</span> <span word="adults">adults</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="today">today</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="satisfying">satisfying</span> <span word="lives">lives</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="parents">parents</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>.</p><p> 这句话当中的<span word="when">when</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="considered">considered</span>和<span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为：</p><p> <span word="Young">Young</span> <span word="adults">adults</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="today">today</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="satisfying">satisfying</span> <span word="lives">lives</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="parents">parents</span>.</p><p> 2. 有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换，例如：</p><p> <span word="Due">Due</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="grandparents">grandparents</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="under">under</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="obligation">obligation</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="parents">parents</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="did">did</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="options">options</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="time">time</span>.</p><p> <span word="due">due</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span>就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子，可以替换，简化为下面的表达方式：</p>
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