雅思大作文真题点评及写作思路拓展
<p> 雅思大作文真题点评及写作思路拓展：搬迁解决住房问题</p><p> <span word="TOPIC">TOPIC</span>: <span word="Traffic">Traffic</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="housing">housing</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="cities">cities</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="solved">solved</span> <span word="by">by</span>.<span word="moving">moving</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="companies">companies</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="factories">factories</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="countryside">countryside</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="above">above</span> <span word="statement">statement</span>?</p><p> 下面为一考生的回忆,这是中国考生普遍的写作思路:</p><p> 居然要把大公司和大工厂都搬到农村去?解决交通和住房问题? 偶第一个不同意</p><p> 先讲讲人权问题，凭什么要大公司的搬，大公司的人就不是人么?再考虑一下搬那么大一个公司要花多少钱?谁来替欧们出? 该死的，有钱干嘛不去多建设些地铁?偶们虽然在大公司收入比较高，但好歹也上有小下有老，我们每天也要回家的。你以为公司搬了，我们每个人都爱厂如家了? 去死吧，我们要每天开车回家的啊，这个都没想到?你还改善个<span word="P">P</span>交通啊。</p><p> 还是来谈点实际吧，想解决问题? 来来来，听我细细说来，最起码也要多盖房子，多建地下铁，用城市包围农村---别问我为什么，这个好像是<span word="XX">XX</span>领袖说的。或许我们还可以搞搞高科技，什么天空之城啦，空中飞车啦，将来不再是梦了。</p><p> 点评:</p><p> 此考生在打擦边球,即偏题但没有完全跑题.这种情况下就算是英语专业博士生,最高也只能拿6分.</p>
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