雅思写作参考范文：小孩犯罪家长应受惩罚吗？
<p> 雅思写作参考范文</p><p> <span word="When">When</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="five">five</span>-<span word="year">year</span>-<span word="old">old</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="commits">commits</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="crime">crime</span>, <span word="should">should</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="punished">punished</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="that">that</span>? <span word="In">In</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>, <span word="at">at</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="age">age</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="start">start</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="responsible">responsible</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="he">he</span>/<span word="she">she</span> <span word="did">did</span>?</p><p> ----------<span word="Argumentation">Argumentation</span>--------289 <span word="words">words</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="total">total</span>--------------</p><p> <span word="There">There</span> <span word="seem">seem</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="senseless">senseless</span>/<span word="unconscious">unconscious</span> <span word="crimes">crimes</span> <span word="done">done</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="appear">appear</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="lack">lack</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="motive">motive</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="indulge">indulge</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="whim">whim</span>. <span word="What">What</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="thorny">thorny</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="handle">handle</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="victim">victim</span> <span word="involved">involved</span>! <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="argue">argue</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="environment">environment</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="responsible">responsible</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="delinquency">delinquency</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="absolutely">absolutely</span> <span word="wrong">wrong</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="society">society</span>, <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="influence">influence</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="children">children</span>. <span word="Generally">Generally</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="five">five</span>-<span word="year">year</span>-<span word="old">old</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="sent">sent</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attend">attend</span> <span word="kindergarten">kindergarten</span>. <span word="Obviously">Obviously</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="spends">spends</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="deal">deal</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="exposed">exposed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="influences">influences</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span>, <span word="other">other</span> <span word="children">children</span>, <span word="other">other</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="television">television</span>. <span word="Particularly">Particularly</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="contemporary">contemporary</span> <span word="families">families</span>, <span word="both">both</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="required">required</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="work">work</span>, <span word="sometimes">sometimes</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="time">time</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="situation">situation</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="possibly">possibly</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="kids">kids</span> <span word="falling">falling</span> <span word="under">under</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="influence">influence</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="media">media</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="case">case</span> <span word="then">then</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="punished">punished</span> <span word="whenever">whenever</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="commit">commit</span> <span word="crimes">crimes</span>. <span word="Undoubtedly">Undoubtedly</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="impractical">impractical</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="implement">implement</span>.</p><p> <span word="What">What</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="age">age</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="justify">justify</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="starting">starting</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="charge">charge</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="actions">actions</span>? <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> 15 <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="rational">rational</span>/<span word="justified">justified</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="China">China</span>, <span word="nine">nine</span>-<span word="year">year</span> <span word="compulsory">compulsory</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="system">system</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="mould">mould</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="comparatively">comparatively</span> <span word="sensible">sensible</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="responsible">responsible</span> <span word="person">person</span>, <span word="because">because</span> <span word="basic">basic</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="law">law</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="conducted">conducted</span> <span word="and">and</span>, <span word="consequently">consequently</span> <span word="a">a</span> 15-<span word="year">year</span>-<span word="old">old</span> <span word="teenager">teenager</span> <span word="basically">basically</span> <span word="knows">knows</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="qualities">qualities</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="law">law</span>-<span word="abiding">abiding</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span>. <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, 15 <span word="or">or</span> <span word="over">over</span>, <span word="when">when</span> <span word="committing">committing</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="crime">crime</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="deserves">deserves</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="prize">prize</span> <span word="behind">behind</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bar">bar</span>.</p>
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