雅思8分作文赏析：广告利弊
<p> 雅思8分作文赏析：广告利弊</p><p> 写在前面：10月16日又参加雅思考试，主要是想磨磨刀，给自己的教学添加一点内容。写作又是考了八分。惭愧!真不如人家一个17岁的小女孩<span word="who">who</span>拿了九分。考完了之后我立即回忆一字不漏地将<span word="task">task</span>2记录下来。供新老朋友们参考-------赖劲松。</p><p> <span word="TOPIC">TOPIC</span> <span word="Advertising">Advertising</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="having">having</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bigger">bigger</span> <span word="influence">influence</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="lives">lives</span>. <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="negative">negative</span> <span word="effects">effects</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span> <span word="outweigh">outweigh</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="positive">positive</span> <span word="effects">effects</span>. <span word="Whats">Whats</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>?</p><p> 我简单地审了一下题，马上确定写作思路为<span word="introduction">introduction</span>一段，<span word="positive">positive</span>一段，<span word="negative">negative</span>一段，最后一段写出自己的选择。由于<span word="effects">effects</span>是复数,所以每段须有两个<span word="ideas">ideas</span>。开始觉得没啥<span word="ideas">ideas</span>,没关系，边写<span word="introduction">introduction</span>边构思，这时候只过了不到两分钟，我就下笔了。</p><p> <span word="Nowadays">Nowadays</span>, <span word="no">no</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="around">around</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="city">city</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="countryside">countryside</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="pretty">pretty</span> <span word="easy">easy</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="signs">signs</span> <span word="introducing">introducing</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="product">product</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="increasingly">increasingly</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="popular">popular</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="lives">lives</span>. <span word="Whether">Whether</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="influence">influence</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="examined">examined</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="follows">follows</span>.</p><p> <span word="We">We</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="start">start</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="talking">talking</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="merits">merits</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span>. <span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>, <span word="advertising">advertising</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="informative">informative</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="provides">provides</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="customers">customers</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="quick">quick</span> <span word="access">access</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="product">product</span> <span word="needed">needed</span>. <span word="Take">Take</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="example">example</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="resident">resident</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Guangzhou">Guangzhou</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="metropolitan">metropolitan</span> <span word="city">city</span> <span word="located">located</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="south">south</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="China">China</span>. <span word="At">At</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="beginning">beginning</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="moving">moving</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="city">city</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="did">did</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="clue">clue</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="purchase">purchase</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="necessities">necessities</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="newly">newly</span>-<span word="bought">bought</span> <span word="flat">flat</span>. <span word="Thanks">Thanks</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ads">ads</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="newspapers">newspapers</span>, <span word="amazingly">amazingly</span> <span word="almost">almost</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="items">items</span> <span word="ranging">ranging</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="furniture">furniture</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="household">household</span> <span word="appliances">appliances</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="settled">settled</span> <span word="within">within</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="week">week</span>. <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="expect">expect</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="price">price</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="comparing">comparing</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="contrasting">contrasting</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="prices">prices</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="specifications">specifications</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="commodity">commodity</span> <span word="advertised">advertised</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="suppliers">suppliers</span>.</p>
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