制胜高分：细述雅思大作文3大评分标准
<p> 细述雅思大作文3大评分标准</p><p> 一、<span word="Task">Task</span> <span word="Response">Response</span>。在这个方面最重要的是字数和审题。</p><p> 字数的问题相对比较小些，很多同学认为字数是硬件，但就因为认为只要是把字数写够，再用一些比较高级的词汇和复合句就算完成了任务，而最后由于没有把握论证的方向，造成写作扣题不严密的同学比比皆是。有的甚至把问题解决型的文章写成了辩论式的文章。如有同学在一篇讨论为什么有许多民工进城，如何解决的文章的引言段里写到：<span word="As">As</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="peasants">peasants</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="flooding">flooding</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="metropolises">metropolises</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="continually">continually</span>, <span word="vast">vast</span> <span word="changes">changes</span> <span word="await">await</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="society">society</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="speed">speed</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="cities">cities</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="is">is</span> <span word="rising">rising</span> <span word="faster">faster</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="ever">ever</span> <span word="before">before</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="partly">partly</span> <span word="due">due</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="hardworking">hardworking</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="this">this</span> <span word="phenomenon">phenomenon</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="exerted">exerted</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="negative">negative</span> <span word="impacts">impacts</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="pressure">pressure</span>, <span word="over">over</span>-<span word="population">population</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="housing">housing</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>.这位同学犯了答非所问的错误，题目要求答的是原因和解决办法，不是分析其所带来的正面及负面问题，最后无论语言质量多高，也拿不到好的分数。可见审题是非常重要的，它是同学通向高分的第一步。</p><p> 笔者认为审题可以分为读题和解题两步骤。上述同学所犯的错误属于读题不仔细，没有认真看，而解题主要体现在如何把握题目所争论的焦点。很多同学看到题目中认识的单词，就开始发挥想象力，真可谓是下笔千言，离题万里。但是殊不知只有把握题目争论重心，才能保证论证有的方式放矢，获得高分。例如题目为：<span word="Will">Will</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="replace">replace</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span>?的文章中，有的同学在论述的过程中所提出的观点是：<span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>, <span word="teacher">teacher</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="computer">computer</span>.该同学在继续论述老师为什么比电脑重要的同时其实已经偏离了重心，应当考虑的重点是，电脑不能取代老师，因为老师很重要。</p>
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