推荐雅思写作示范杂志：《经济学人》
<p> 灵活地运用动词和表达方式是关键所在。如果仅仅依靠背单词书，那么脑子里只会储存单个词的中文意思，无法应用它们来连贯地组成句子。因此，读适当的文章或段落、并仔细体会行文中的灵活应用，对于自己的写作提高会有很大的帮助。</p><p> 《经济学人》是一份非常适合做雅思写作示范的杂志，大家可以上网浏览他们的每期内容，尤其是科技版，其中有不少写作的段落都可以激发我们在流程图写作中的灵感。</p><p> 在此仅以下面一小段举例：</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="slick">slick</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="molten">molten</span> <span word="gold">gold</span>， <span word="dawn">dawn</span> <span word="breaks">breaks</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="trees">trees</span> <span word="awaken">awaken</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="leaf">leaf</span>， <span word="chlorophyll">chlorophyll</span> <span word="molecules">molecules</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="seizing">seizing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="photosynthesis">photosynthesis</span>. <span word="Using">Using</span> <span word="sunlight">sunlight</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="ship">ship</span> <span word="electrons">electrons</span>， <span word="they">they</span> <span word="split">split</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="molecules">molecules</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="combine">combine</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="resulting">resulting</span> <span word="hydrogen">hydrogen</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="carbon">carbon</span> <span word="dioxide">dioxide</span> <span word="extracted">extracted</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="air">air</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="produces">produces</span> <span word="carbohydrates">carbohydrates</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="trees">trees</span> <span word="turn">turn</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="sugars">sugars</span>， <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="burnt">burnt</span> <span word="off">off</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="respiration">respiration</span> <span word="or">or</span>， <span word="by">by</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="chemical">chemical</span> <span word="process">process</span>， <span word="turned">turned</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="plant">plant</span>- <span word="matter">matter</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="main">main</span> <span word="waste">waste</span> <span word="product">product</span> <span word="oxygen">oxygen</span>， <span word="they">they</span> <span word="emit">emit</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="stomata">stomata</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="watery">watery</span> <span word="belch">belch</span>. <span word="Hence">Hence</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rainforests">rainforests</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="level">level</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="humidity">humidity</span>， <span word="visible">visible</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="observation">observation</span> <span word="tower">tower</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="diaphanous">diaphanous</span> <span word="cloudlets">cloudlets</span> <span word="drifting">drifting</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="canopy">canopy</span>. （摘自2010/09/23 <span word="Economist">Economist</span>《经济学人》英文版）</p><p> 文章中大概讲得是光合作用的过程。里面有些复杂些的词汇，但是如果我们把重点从生词上转移到研究作者的写法上面时，会发现除了最开头的写法不适合雅思之外，后面的叙述部分都展现出了严谨而灵活的流程图论述能力。请大家重点看粗体部分，有些用得非常灵活的词汇，比如运输采用<span word="ship">ship</span>，还有<span word="extracted">extracted</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="air">air</span>（如果我们自己凭空想象，很容易把这里平淡无味地写成<span word="come">come</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="air">air</span>）。如果用心体会，做好笔记，就可以在下次自己的流程图写作练习中实践，在反复练习后一定能够取得良好的效果。</p>
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