求职信中容易被忽略的细节
<p>写求职信的目的在于获得职位，一封求职信无论如何文辞并茂，令人心动，公司<span word="HR">HR</span>主管不见到应聘者本人是不会给予工作机会的。因此，求职信的实际目的在于获得面谈的机会。许多人都会<span word="copy">copy</span>网上的求职信范本，导致千篇一律，这是非常不可取的。我们已经讲过怎样写求职信，这次我们来谈谈求职信写作中容易被忽略的细节问题。</p><p>一、求职信的第一段说明写信的目的，有些专家认为不宜用分词句子，比如用下面的句子做开头，因为这样的句子被人用得大多，显得陈腐，失去特点。</p><p><span word="Replying">Replying</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span>...</p><p><span word="Answering">Answering</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span>...</p><p><span word="Believing">Believing</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span>...</p><p><span word="Thinking">Thinking</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="vacancy">vacancy</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="company">company</span>...</p><p><span word="Having">Having</span> <span word="read">read</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="ad">ad</span>...</p><p>再比较下面三组例句。每一组里面(1)句较差，经过修改后(2)句显得比较恰当。</p><p><span word="A">A</span>:</p><p>(1) <span word="Replying">Replying</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Boston">Boston</span> <span word="Evening">Evening</span> <span word="Globe">Globe</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="wish">wish</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="manager">manager</span>.</p><p>(2) <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="applying">applying</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="manager">manager</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="qualifications">qualifications</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="exacting">exacting</span> <span word="requirements">requirements</span>.</p><p><span word="B">B</span>:</p><p>(1) <span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="reading">reading</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="morning">morning</span>'<span word="s">s</span> <span word="Journal">Journal</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="offering">offering</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="for">for</span>.</p><p>(2) <span word="Your">Your</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="morning">morning</span>'<span word="s">s</span> <span word="Journal">Journal</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="adjustment">adjustment</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="prompted">prompted</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="position">position</span>.</p>
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