麦格劳-希尔英语写作大赛作品及专家点评（...
<p><span word="Never">Never</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="late">late</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="learn">learn</span></p><p>“<span word="Ordinary">Ordinary</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="merely">merely</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="shall">shall</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="time">time</span>; <span word="a">a</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="talent">talent</span> <span word="tries">tries</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="it">it</span>.” <span word="If">If</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="concentrate">concentrate</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="learning">learning</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="catch">catch</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="lives">lives</span>.</p><p><span word="Most">Most</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="that">that</span> “ <span word="I">I</span> <span word="don">don</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="study">study</span>.” “ <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="baby">baby</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="parents">parents</span>.” “ <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="prepare">prepare</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="lessons">lessons</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="wonderful">wonderful</span> <span word="class">class</span>.” “ <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="lots">lots</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="housework">housework</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="cook">cook</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="family">family</span>.” <span word="Because">Because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="busy">busy</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="going">going</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="choose">choose</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="save">save</span> <span word="time">time</span>. <span word="Everyone">Everyone</span> <span word="has">has</span> 24 <span word="hours">hours</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="day">day</span>, <span word="why">why</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="successeful">successeful</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="commen">commen</span>? <span word="The">The</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="thing">thing</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="time">time</span>. <span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="goodby">goodby</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="games">games</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="plan">plan</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="learning">learning</span> <span word="then">then</span> <span word="depart">depart</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="parts">parts</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="instance">instance</span>, 6:00-7:00 <span word="Reading">Reading</span> <span word="English">English</span>. 10:00-10:20 <span word="Wrinting">Wrinting</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="passage">passage</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="scheme">scheme</span> <span word="down">down</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="stick">stick</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="obvious">obvious</span> <span word="place">place</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="everyday">everyday</span>, <span word="that">that</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="obey">obey</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="plan">plan</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="then">then</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sheet">sheet</span>. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="above">above</span> ,<span word="you">you</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span>. <span word="Reading">Reading</span> <span word="books">books</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="choice">choice</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="study">study</span> , <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="don">don</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="know">know</span>. <span word="thus">thus</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="interested">interested</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="learning">learning</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="day">day</span>. <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="most">most</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="married">married</span>, <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="baby">baby</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="spare">spare</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="baby">baby</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="baby">baby</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="know">know</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="don">don</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="names">names</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fruit">fruit</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="baby">baby</span>’<span word="s">s</span> <span word="book">book</span>. <span word="Everytime">Everytime</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="word">word</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="dictionary">dictionary</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="notes">notes</span> <span word="then">then</span> <span word="try">try</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="remember">remember</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="My">My</span> <span word="daughter">daughter</span> <span word="likes">likes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="though">though</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="half">half</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="old">old</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="babies">babies</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="effect">effect</span> <span word="them">them</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="love">love</span> <span word="studying">studying</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="habit">habit</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="learning">learning</span> .<span word="Your">Your</span> <span word="baby">baby</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="her">her</span>/<span word="him">him</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="new">new</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="felt">felt</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="way">way</span>, <span word="this">this</span> <span word="summer">summer</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="course">course</span>, <span word="when">when</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="reading">reading</span> ,<span word="my">my</span> <span word="daughter">daughter</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="come">come</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="book">book</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="like">like</span> “ <span word="xuexi">xuexi</span>” <span word="the">the</span> <span word="chinese">chinese</span> <span word="meaning">meaning</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="learning">learning</span> , <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="excited">excited</span> , <span word="that">that</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="effects">effects</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="her">her</span>. <span word="Thirdly">Thirdly</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="millions">millions</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="graduated">graduated</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="univercity">univercity</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="year">year</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="competitors">competitors</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="works">works</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="schools">schools</span>. <span word="Most">Most</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="post">post</span>-<span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="student">student</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="don">don</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="knocked">knocked</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="days">days</span>.<span word="Of">Of</span> <span word="course">course</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="busy">busy</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="hardworking">hardworking</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="changed">changed</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="love">love</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="them">them</span>. <span word="That">That</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="stop">stop</span> <span word="learning">learning</span>. <span word="Learning">Learning</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="method">method</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="teaching">teaching</span>. <span word="Learning">Learning</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="teaching">teaching</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="learning">learning</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="usage">usage</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="skills">skills</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="English">English</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span>, <span word="We">We</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="enough">enough</span> , <span word="if">if</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="aright">aright</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="buy">buy</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="books">books</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="teach">teach</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="teach">teach</span> <span word="well">well</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="surf">surf</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="internet">internet</span>, <span word="search">search</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="useful">useful</span> <span word="information">information</span>,<span word="and">and</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="processes">processes</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="teaching">teaching</span>. <span word="we">we</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="summer">summer</span> <span word="holiday">holiday</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="winter">winter</span> <span word="holiday">holiday</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="lucky">lucky</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="months">months</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lesson">lesson</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="useful">useful</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="us">us</span>. <span word="Let">Let</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="bady">bady</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="daytime">daytime</span>. <span word="Try">Try</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="succeed">succeed</span>.</p>
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