作文（60分）
<dl> <dt> <p>作文（60分）<br />惬意，是满意，是舒服，是一种愉悦的感受。一道难题的破解，一次意外的表扬，一份期待的礼物，一个小小的发现……都会让你欣喜。一丝惬意心中来，心情好了，花会格外地艳，草会格外地绿，水会格外地清，阳光也会特别地温暖……<br />请以“一丝惬意心中来”为题写一篇文章。<br />要求：①将题目抄写在答题卡上；<br />②除诗歌、剧本以外文体不限；<br />③不少于600字；<br />④文中不要出现(或暗示)本人的姓名、校名。</p> </dt> <dd> <p><span class="option">答案</span><i>略</i></p> <p><span class="parsing">解析</span><i><table border="1" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0"><tr><td width="142" style="width:106.5pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding: 0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt">项目、类别<br /></td><td width="142" style="width:106.5pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-left: none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt">A<br /></td><td width="142" style="width:106.55pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-left: none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt">B<br /></td><td width="142" style="width:106.55pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-left: none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt">C<br /></td></tr><tr><td width="142" style="width:106.5pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top: none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt">一类卷<br />（54分—60分）<br /></td><td width="142" style="width:106.5pt;border-top:none;border-left:none; border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt; padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt">中心突出，内容<br />新颖，有真情实感<br /></td><td width="142" style="width:106.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none; border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt; padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt">语句通顺<br />语言生动流畅，表达方式恰当<br /></td><td width="142" style="width:106.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none; border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt; padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt">条理清楚<br />结构完整<br /></td></tr><tr><td width="142" style="width:106.5pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top: none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt">二类卷<br />（47分—53分）<br /></td><td width="142" style="width:106.5pt;border-top:none;border-left:none; border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt; padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt">中心明确<br />材料得当<br />有真情实感<br /></td><td width="142" style="width:106.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none; border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt; padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt">语句较通顺<br />表达方式恰当<br /></td><td width="142" style="width:106.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none; border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt; padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt">条理较清楚<br />结构较完整<br /></td></tr><tr><td width="142" style="width:106.5pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top: none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt">三类卷<br />（40分—46分）<br /></td><td width="142" style="width:106.5pt;border-top:none;border-left:none; border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt; padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt">有中心<br />较有真情实感<br /></td><td width="142" style="width:106.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none; border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt; padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt">语句不通<br />病句较多<br /></td><td width="142" style="width:106.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none; border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt; padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt">条理不够清楚<br />结构不够完整<br /></td></tr><tr><td width="142" style="width:106.5pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top: none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt">四类卷<br />（40分以下）<br /></td><td width="142" style="width:106.5pt;border-top:none;border-left:none; border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt; padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt">无中心<br />文不对题目<br />胡编乱造<br /></td><td width="142" style="width:106.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none; border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt; padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt">文理不通<br />语无伦次<br /></td><td width="142" style="width:106.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none; border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt; padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt">条理和结构混乱<br /></td></tr></table></i></p> </dd> </dl>
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