【英文邮件,求语法挑错,修改词汇I#39;mabigfanofXXXfromChina.Icametoknowaboutyourin2023.InthePV,ithinkthatyouaresopretty,andespeciallycool!IlikeyouandXXXverymuch.Becauseofthemyjapaneseisverypoorsoican#39;te】
<p>问题：【英文邮件,求语法挑错,修改词汇I#39;mabigfanofXXXfromChina.Icametoknowaboutyourin2023.InthePV,ithinkthatyouaresopretty,andespeciallycool!IlikeyouandXXXverymuch.Becauseofthemyjapaneseisverypoorsoican#39;te】<p>答案：↓↓↓<p class="nav-title mt10" style="border-top:1px solid #ccc;padding-top: 10px;">丁凡的回答：<div class="content-b">网友采纳 I'mabigfanofXXXfromChina.Icametoknowaboutyourin2012.（your-you) Inthe<XXX>PV,ithinkthatyouaresopretty,andespeciallycool!IlikeyouandXXXverymuch. (此句不通顺,用so...that可能改善点） Becauseofthemyjapaneseisverypoorsoican'texpressverywellmytotalsupportandadorationforyou.(because与so不能连用,二者必须删除一个；becauseof后面跟的是短语,because后面才是跟句子的；japanese首字母大写；老外最不喜欢中国人说自己语言poor） Iwishyourcoulddobetterandbetterinthefutureandi'mwillalwaybeyourbiggistfanwhopaysattentiontowhatyoudoallthetime.(第一个your-you;i'm-I;alway-always;biggist-biggest) isincerelyhopethatyoucanwritemeback.iwillbewaitingforyou.(期待某人的来信习惯用lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.) 其实我建议你重写,文章很别扭.<p class="nav-title mt10" style="border-top:1px solid #ccc;padding-top: 10px;">饶青的回答：<div class="content-b">网友采纳 能否请你按照我的思路写一篇呢？<p class="nav-title mt10" style="border-top:1px solid #ccc;padding-top: 10px;">丁凡的回答：<div class="content-b">网友采纳 如果这是写给你偶像的邮件，我觉得直接用你自己的语言会更真实，人家读的是你的诚意不是你的英语水平，努力用自己的语言去表达，不要在乎写得好不好，加油！<p class="nav-title mt10" style="border-top:1px solid #ccc;padding-top: 10px;">饶青的回答：<div class="content-b">网友采纳 是作业好吗……<p class="nav-title mt10" style="border-top:1px solid #ccc;padding-top: 10px;">丁凡的回答：<div class="content-b">网友采纳 汗流浃背，童鞋哎，作业要自己做的好不好，词典呀，单词呀去翻翻嘛
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