写了篇托福英文口语文章请求狠拍砖ithinkthemostmemorableeventisabasketballgameinmycollege.thisbasketballgamegavemelotsofinspirationaboutlife.forexample,wheniencounterdifficultiesinmylife,icantofacebravel
<p>问题：写了篇托福英文口语文章请求狠拍砖ithinkthemostmemorableeventisabasketballgameinmycollege.thisbasketballgamegavemelotsofinspirationaboutlife.forexample,wheniencounterdifficultiesinmylife,icantofacebravel<p>答案：↓↓↓<p class="nav-title mt10" style="border-top:1px solid #ccc;padding-top: 10px;">任晓光的回答：<div class="content-b">网友采纳 没细节,没重点,内容好平淡.没连接词. 错误太多了,好好理顺了再写吧. icantofacebravely.（can不加to..）而且这个EXAMPLE很突兀. 一段中的中心句一定要放前2句里,要不然老外就看不懂了. wouldhaveto是什么意思（本来要做却没做?) foldedsomuchpressure(fold第一次看到这样用）
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