麻烦帮我看看这句话有没有语法错误Deteriorationcouldleadtodecreasingtheminimumperformanceperiodofbuildingmaterials,whichmeansthatthematerialswillnotlasttillwhatitwasexpectedto.
<p>问题：麻烦帮我看看这句话有没有语法错误Deteriorationcouldleadtodecreasingtheminimumperformanceperiodofbuildingmaterials,whichmeansthatthematerialswillnotlasttillwhatitwasexpectedto.<p>答案：↓↓↓<p class="nav-title mt10" style="border-top:1px solid #ccc;padding-top: 10px;">李康的回答：<div class="content-b">网友采纳 这句子前半部大致没有问题 但whatitwasexpectedto就有保留 首先是it这个代名词 相信应当是指thematerials 若是如此 应当用they 而且时式较宜用‘现在时’ 再从整个短句来看 以改动最少的原则而言 可以考虑用2个方法来表达 其一是用when 即tillwhentheyareexpectedto 其二是用what 即tillwhattheyareexpectedof (句子原为theyareexpectedofsth,将sth用what代替,再调在开首而成) 所以不应用to,而是要用of 至於较大的改动 可参考oxd_bxo的方法 略为改成 Deteriorationcouldcausethedecreasein(theshorteningof)theminimumperformanceperiodofbuildingmaterials,whichmeansthematerialswilllastshorterthantheyareexpected. 或 Deteriorationcoulddecrease(shorten)theminimumperformanceperiodofbuilding materials,whichmeansthematerialswilllastshorterthanexpected. 希望有达人在这问题上给意见
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