【自己l写的高一英文自我介绍有何错误?Hello,everyone.I#39;msogladtointorducemyself.AndI#39;mhappyIcanbeamemberof-------highschool.Myhobbyisdrawingpictures.Ilikereadingbooksbest,Ithinkbookscanmakemehappyandgiveme】
<p>问题：【自己l写的高一英文自我介绍有何错误?Hello,everyone.I#39;msogladtointorducemyself.AndI#39;mhappyIcanbeamemberof-------highschool.Myhobbyisdrawingpictures.Ilikereadingbooksbest,Ithinkbookscanmakemehappyandgiveme】<p>答案：↓↓↓<p class="nav-title mt10" style="border-top:1px solid #ccc;padding-top: 10px;">孙傲冰的回答：<div class="content-b">网友采纳 ".Ilikereadingbooksbest"这句以鄙人浅薄的知识认为不要“best”,以及第二段第一句的"too"不要,还有下面的从句“IfindthatEnglishwhichIstudiedinthehighschoolisverydifferentfromEnglishwhichIstudiedbefore.“里面的that可以去掉吧,不知道你的“that”是做什么理解的,并且这一句前面最好加“but”转折, “IthinkEnglishthattaughtinthehighschoolismoredifficult”里面的taught前加was 微薄意见,仅供参考……
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