meili 发表于 2022-10-27 15:38:24

【帮我看下语法有没有错误哪里错了可以帮忙修改一下MyDadtoldmehewanttobeabackpackerandwithmegoestotravel.Infact,I#39;mreallyhappybutIpretendnothinghadhappened.Iwanttotrysomedifferentsomeamazinglivinge】

<p>问题:【帮我看下语法有没有错误哪里错了可以帮忙修改一下MyDadtoldmehewanttobeabackpackerandwithmegoestotravel.Infact,I#39;mreallyhappybutIpretendnothinghadhappened.Iwanttotrysomedifferentsomeamazinglivinge】
<p>答案:↓↓↓<p class="nav-title mt10" style="border-top:1px solid #ccc;padding-top: 10px;">林柏梁的回答:<div class="content-b">网友采纳  MyDadtoldmehewantedtobeabackpackerandgototravelwithme.  Infact,IwasreallyhappybutIpretendednothinghadhappened.  Iwanttotrysomedifferentandamazingliving(evenIcangototravelpart-timeandworkpart-time)(这句话有问题但是我不知道你想说什么?并且我也不知道你是想表达当时的感受还是一直如此?只能大概改一下前面了).  I'mlookingforwardtoit.<p class="nav-title mt10" style="border-top:1px solid #ccc;padding-top: 10px;">戴一奇的回答:<div class="content-b">网友采纳  括号里我想说(甚至可以边打工边旅游我也无所谓)不知道怎么写<p class="nav-title mt10" style="border-top:1px solid #ccc;padding-top: 10px;">林柏梁的回答:<div class="content-b">网友采纳  那可以这样:IwanttotrysomedifferentandamazinglivingevenImustdopart-timeworkinthejourney.我居然把work可不可数给忘了对不起……你再看一下吧
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